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I've always the quite one. The weirdo you've never notice but scence I've learn how to focus. I've realize why I shut myself up. I have too big of a mouth and too much love to burn out. I've seen it all before. I guess I was that girl. So what if I just sat quietly and not speak to anyone who approached me. you'd never notice the pain behind that smile. It's burned out….burned out. Crowed my head again. All I can do is hurt over and over. I'm hurting u, myself and him. la la la la la la la. This morning I told myself I could change but all I ever do if screw it up. Maybe this time, oh wait today but I can't I have failed u again and again. I just can't shut my big mouth. Words come out like knifes that scar u and leave you with the pain of guilty lies. I'm drowning in blood. Too much emotions going through my heart. Pain, love, guilt… and lots of other things. Too much overwhelming me. I'll be the girl who cries herself to sleep at night rethinking these memories. I've always been the hyper one, with a smile and I wanted to change this sad place but all I've done is made it worse!!!!!!!!!.
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:icon52hertzwhale:
52HertzWhale Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
The grammar and spelling is pathetic. Go to school. And if you're under thirteen, get off of DeviantART.
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GurRaeye Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excuse me! Who gives you the right to go ahead and just trash someone like that!? Not everyone is just so "perfect," ya know!
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52HertzWhale Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
I'm not trashing anyone. What's the point of posting something if all you want is nice comments and praise? That's not how it is in the real world. People aren't simply going to be nice because you're sensitive. The sooner you can understand that, the better.
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TTflower97 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
omg for the last time im not asking for any praise -_-
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GurRaeye Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I actually really understand that. But not everything a person posts they want to have that kind of an answer. The way you put it, that was flat out rudeness.
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52HertzWhale Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
If all one can look at is the TONE of the words and not the message, then they have different problems. Once you can learn to take information out of things and recognize your faults, you'll be MUCH better off.
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GurRaeye Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wasn't talking just about the tone, those words you chose, they were not the best of words to choose if you wanted to be kind in your criticism.
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52HertzWhale Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
The words I chose make up the tone. Criticism isn't about being kind. At all. Criticism is about showing someone what they've done wrong and what they need to do to make it better.
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TTflower97 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
UR NOT CRITICIZING UR INSULTING! <_< FINAL STATEMENT.
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